Some feedback please

Hi all

As part of an assignment we have to design a make believe website and as I plan one day I hope to start a small website and graphic design business from home, I thought I would run with that. I already have a large website but it is not suitable to show the teacher or class so had to try something different. I am not used to and still learning how to do other graphics so would appreciate any feedback, comments or suggestions on what I have come up with

Hope its ok to ask this here

Thanks