fantastic interface for this VN! wonderful setup for the premise, loved watching things gradually unfold, really felt the ending too. good job putting this together!
the brevity only adds to this. so much is ommited but so much is said in the precious little time we have. the dynamic is phenomenal and unique, the somatic descriptions are visceral, the admin commands are such a uniquely violating touch, and the ending is such a wonderful little bow on top. the aesthetics are perfect too, especially for their simplicity. its good!!!
Thank you so much for your compliments, this comment made my day! Really happy to know it all came together so well to get such a response. Thank you so much, again, for reading <3
really, really good. i liked the descriptions of what being a program might feel like and the theme of who's actually running the interview. i like that despite the tagline implying we'd be reading from the admin's point of view the perspective is andy's. it creates a lot of immediate questions upon loading it that you answered very well.
Really excellent presentation, and such a strong story told in such a brief amount of words! I think it's fascinating only getting this brief glimpse into the world this computer resides in, and the bits and pieces of the more personal and raw past really give the conversation a snappy and disgruntled tone that I really enjoyed!
Thank you, I am delighted you liked it! I was really worried about it being too short a story to have the impact I intended it to so this is really good to hear <3
Neat! I liked it, lots of emotion packed into such a short time and the sound design and the screen gave it a cool tactile feel, the conversation drifting more and more into the personal and away from the whistle blowing felt very natural
Thank you so much for playing! I wanted to pack as much emotion as I could into these two characters, and half way into writing the plot that served as the backdrop I realized, if I was in the admin’s shoes this could not possibly be NOT personal. Glad that came off naturally :]
I really liked this, great presentation, great pacing especially in how the scope expanded and focused back in on the conversation itself. There is so much frustration shared between these two characters. Very excellent!
Thank you so much! Very happy to hear you enjoyed the presentation and pacing, I had fun deciding just how much these characters would share of their story and their grievances without it becoming too much exposition so really glad to hear you think it was done well :]
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fantastic interface for this VN! wonderful setup for the premise, loved watching things gradually unfold, really felt the ending too. good job putting this together!
Thank you so much, your comment made my day! I’m really happy you liked the interface and ending, wanted to make sure it packed a punch ;D
the brevity only adds to this. so much is ommited but so much is said in the precious little time we have. the dynamic is phenomenal and unique, the somatic descriptions are visceral, the admin commands are such a uniquely violating touch, and the ending is such a wonderful little bow on top. the aesthetics are perfect too, especially for their simplicity. its good!!!
Thank you so much for your compliments, this comment made my day! Really happy to know it all came together so well to get such a response. Thank you so much, again, for reading <3
oh i love this - the presentation and path of the narrative are really well done and i enjoyed getting enraptured by it until it was over!
Thank you for playing, really happy you liked it so!!! <3
really, really good. i liked the descriptions of what being a program might feel like and the theme of who's actually running the interview. i like that despite the tagline implying we'd be reading from the admin's point of view the perspective is andy's. it creates a lot of immediate questions upon loading it that you answered very well.
Thank you! <3
Excellent interface drama. The story being a brief glimpse into the past is a neat touch.
Thank you! Glad you liked it :]
Really excellent presentation, and such a strong story told in such a brief amount of words! I think it's fascinating only getting this brief glimpse into the world this computer resides in, and the bits and pieces of the more personal and raw past really give the conversation a snappy and disgruntled tone that I really enjoyed!
Thank you, I am delighted you liked it! I was really worried about it being too short a story to have the impact I intended it to so this is really good to hear <3
Neat! I liked it, lots of emotion packed into such a short time and the sound design and the screen gave it a cool tactile feel, the conversation drifting more and more into the personal and away from the whistle blowing felt very natural
Thank you so much for playing! I wanted to pack as much emotion as I could into these two characters, and half way into writing the plot that served as the backdrop I realized, if I was in the admin’s shoes this could not possibly be NOT personal. Glad that came off naturally :]
I really liked this, great presentation, great pacing especially in how the scope expanded and focused back in on the conversation itself. There is so much frustration shared between these two characters. Very excellent!
Thank you so much! Very happy to hear you enjoyed the presentation and pacing, I had fun deciding just how much these characters would share of their story and their grievances without it becoming too much exposition so really glad to hear you think it was done well :]