Situation:
Your best friend cook for you and the fish was too salty.
How will you give feedback to him/her in order to motivate him/her to do a better job next time?
下图即为你组织语言的结构图
Example structure
SpeakerName, youdid a (speehobjective,show recognition) xxx speech, the core message is xxx, and I(tell your overall impression or feeling toward the speech).
For the body part, scan the bottom of the pyramid and come up insights, you could consider from below 4 parts.
Structure
Development
Voice
Body Language
Lastly I’ll give you a bonus to take away, which is the formula to quickly develop thee valuation speech content in the contest.
Closing: make the summary
You made a wonderful inspirational speech by conveying a powerful core message in the ending, if you could make the eye contact more effective, it will be even more inspiring.
本文提供了一种结构化的反馈方法,以激励朋友在烹饪时做得更好。首先认可朋友的努力,然后针对演讲的核心信息给出总体印象。接着从结构、发展、声音和肢体语言四个方面提出具体见解。最后给出一个快速构建评价演讲内容的公式,并以总结结束,建议增加有效的眼神交流以增强演讲的启发性。


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