derien wrote in lit_fic

forgotten community?

Am I the only person who still checks up on this community?

Would this be an okay place to ask for some help with a writing project I'm doing? I've got a story I've now written two different versions of, and I'd like feedback on the two different versions to see which is more viable. If anyone wants to play, drop a note and I'll send you a version. You only get one version, chosen at random. (After you give your thoughts on it, let me know if you're interested in reading the other version, but I don't want your opinions colored by reading both before you give feedback.)

Also, feedback can be as critical as you like - I do want to improve, and lovely pleasant things that I enjoy hearing, like "this is cool!" don't necessarily help me get better.:)